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Deadly Innocence Or: You Can't Reason with the Law of the Jungle
The Adventures of Elle, Part I

F/(M+F) GTS (Macro/Micro) Vore, Soft Digestion
Three picnickers encounter a stranger from another world.

I wrote this story as part of a trade with Karbo. It is my first macro/micro vore story.

Read the story on my site: [link]

Karbo's illustration: [link]
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Mood: Sadness ~AndyTolles Oct 26, 2010
This story was very sad, I kept thinking to my own sister and Fiance Ashley, I literally cried when they died, and if I get that much emotion out of a story it means your a great writer, I just wish it ended happier :(
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~ElPortero Nov 10, 2010
It broke my heart too, while writing it. I think about those characters a lot.
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~AndyTolles Nov 10, 2010
But your other two stories were amazing, in Deadly Innocence I only enjoyed the writing, not the story, but Parts II and III, your writing and story development was amazing, I write fanfics too, not Felarya related just by own design, and I can only DREAM to write that good.
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~Iyellalot Oct 20, 2010
Great story! I do kinda feel bad for Silvia and the others, though.
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~ElPortero Oct 21, 2010
Thank you for your kind words! It was very hard to write their demise, because I really like those characters, but Elle's bottomless stomach demanded otherwise.
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Mood: Love ~4inch Sep 21, 2010
GREAT STORY!
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*FrenchSnack May 29, 2009
I read this (and the sequel) on your website, and somehow never noticed it was also on DA. Excellent work; one of the best Felarya-related stories, in my opinion. The descriptions, the conveying of the characters' feelings, and the contrast between the predator and prey's perspectives are all really well done.
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~Jolly-Phantom Nov 7, 2007
I read this a while back after I saw Karbo's illustration of it! It's really amazing! *o* Definitely powerful. I actually felt kind of scared while reading it. XD

I definitely respect your ability to create an entire situation like that. I find it very impressive, seeing as I can only pull a single random moment out of thin-air with no back-story or lasting characters. XD

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We will never lose if we remove our shoes.
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*Ravana3k Oct 11, 2007  Student Writer
Very good story, my respect :) I'll read your toher stories too in the next time

Maybe you want to read some of my own vore stories? They all play in Felarya
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Mood: Love ~gwadahunter2222 Sep 20, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
It's very good story=D
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