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When Worlds Collide Or: Let's Get Something Good to Eat
The Adventures of Elle, Part II

F/(M+F) GTS (Macro/Micro) Vore, Soft Digestion
Elle meets Crisis the naga as a grand experiment is occuring on the other side of the universe.

This second installment in Elle's ongoing story is again dedicated to my great friend Karbo, Crisis' creator. This work marks my first collaboration with an editor, which I think makes the story much tighter.

Read the story on my site: [link]

Karbo's illustrations: [link] [link]
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~david-dent-jedai Oct 29, 2010
I loooved thus story. Your style of writing is most fun to read and they way you led up to the actual vore part was supesefulated XD Yes I know it isn't a word, but you had me guessing! The ending was fitting for a villain I suppose...Though Menessyan scares me. ^ ^;

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"Moons don't rise from the sea, daggers can't turn back time and there's no magic compass to point to what you want most, you have to reach out and take it!"

HOYSHA! ;P
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~ElPortero Nov 10, 2010
This is probably my favorite of all the stories I've written. I felt I hit the perfect balance between good story and good vore, and I absolutely loved the characters I created.
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~david-dent-jedai Nov 12, 2010
I know! You have a knack for connecting all the dots and not boring me. Then you slam in some vore and humor and bam! Instant story. I don't care what anyone says about not liking Elle, I love her and your writing. ;)...Not trying to be suck up mind ya. ^^; Just trying to be honest.

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"Moons don't rise from the sea, daggers can't turn back time and there's no magic compass to point to what you want most, you have to reach out and take it!"

HOYSHA! ;P
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Mood: Love ~4inch Sep 21, 2010
Great story! The parts without Crisis/Elle are a little bit too long though. Keep up the good work!
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Mood: Love ~goldsilvertornado Jan 10, 2008
one of the best vore stories i have ever read! Excellent work I look forward eagerly to the next one!

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The only way you can ultimately be defeated is if you give up!
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Mood: Love ~ElPortero Jan 10, 2008
Thanks, man! That means a lot to me. The next one is...well...huge. I've never written anything as crazy as this third part.
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*Ravana3k Oct 11, 2007  Student Writer
Excellent story
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~gwadahunter2222 Sep 20, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
It's an excellent story =D
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~ElPortero Sep 20, 2007
Hopefully the next one comes out just as good, or better! :)
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~gwadahunter2222 Sep 20, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
I hope=D
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